I think the whole look is kinda sloppy. If you dont care and are going to the beach then you are all good. But, if you are not then i recommend to choose either the collard shirt or just the shirt (not orange). Cleaner chucks would be good, the off white ones look dirty.
You got so close to absolutely nailing the Dana casual look. Go with a navy tee and swap out for some low tops/sandals/birks, fix your sausage cuffs or just hem it, relax a little, sit next to some potted plants and take a photo... instant +20 thumbs