Casey I know what youre aiming for but I don't think the tee and shirt are getting you there. might need sth like an acne Granville linen type tee. And either like what snow suggested, a sheer/light shirt.. like those from Ann d, or maybe a loose linen shirt would still work better than a cotton ocbd.
Thanks. You guys are right that it needs something looser and lighter and drapier as a top layer. I'll be looking around.