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post #16 of 24
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Originally Posted by lawyerdad View Post
This is my rule of thumb as well^. I spend a fair amount of time editing the work of other lawyers. Excessive commaization is one of my pet peeves. I often suggest a variant of Idler's rule -- "if you don't know why you put a comma there, get rid of it." I think the prevalence of unncecessary commas is in part attributable to the number of people who compose and type simultaneously (and do not go back and edit scrupulously). When people pause while composing a sentence in order to consider what they want to say (type) next, they often insert a comma reflexively.

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post #17 of 24
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Originally Posted by Teacher View Post
It's #2. If you use only one comma, you're indicating that the item after the comma is a (somewhat) independent entity (clause or phrase), which it is not. However, in this case, you can also do without the commas entirely since this is a short and simple sentence. If any part of the sentence were more complicated, the commas would be helpful to identify that you are using contrasting adjectives to describe the same noun.

I would agree. Isn't that an appositive? (#2)
post #18 of 24
It's not a grammar question, it's a stylistic question. The second is preferable for me, but ymmv.
post #19 of 24
The rule, hinges, on two, separate but, equal provisions. /vaclava
post #20 of 24
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Originally Posted by Rosenberg View Post
I would agree. Isn't that an appositive? (#2)

No. An appositive is a word or phrase that renames a noun preceding it. This is just a garden variety adjective.
post #21 of 24
Two commas or none at all.
post #22 of 24
#2, go all out or stay home.
post #23 of 24
From now on, if any of us have a grammar related question, can we just PM Teacher? Teacher, I often have questions when writing a report at work. Be prepared to check your inbox often between 8-5 PM PST M-Th. kthxbai
post #24 of 24
Okay.
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