Shoulder width: good.
Do you have a low right shoulder? If so, did you adjust for this? I didn't know I had one shoulder .75" lower than the other until I walked into a good tailor's shop and he noticed it by looking at me. Measuring from the floor confirmed.
Chest size: good.
Balance: generally good, but is the front a little longer than the back?
Sleeve Pitch: hard to tell without pressing. Does your right shoulder sit far forward in the armhole, towards your chest?
Sleeve Length: good. Could be just slightly longer, particularly the right.
Jacket Length: Can't tell at the back. A little longer than I would prefer in the front. Not much, though.
Pants: Too wrinkled to tell, generally. They seem to fall against the back of your legs just above the knee. If this isn't fixed by pressing, there may need to be some adjustment to get a more uninterrupted line to the floor. The length is waaaay off. Did they send what you had requested?
Overall, I would expect it to look quite good after pressing. I wouldn't have a tailor do anything to the jacket. Other than lengthening the pants, I may ask about how to improve the line of the pants from your seat to the floor.
I think this is the trial he has on.
Which is why I commented that it looked so damn good out of the box.