EMB1980: that looks pretty good to my untrained eye. The back of the jacket needs to be cleaned up. I would also strongly suggest a close-up of how the lapels and collar sit while wearing a shirt and tie. When I did this, it showed a slight collar gap that led Kent to suggest we narrow the collar, which was the spot on recommendation. Right now I cannot tell how it sits relative to your shirt collar because you're wearing a button-down shirt that is open.
And, for what it's worth, listen to Kent's recommendations. He really differentiates his MTM service from the other ones based on how good he is in diagnosing fit issues based on these pictures. I'm very happy with my recent suit.