^I don't find anything wrong with the writing. I feel like there are two types of writers 1) There are writers that put their emotions on paper 2) Writers that write to elicit emotions from the readers like a cause-and-effect
the former is more direct and it does not allow for much imagination whereas the latter does, which maybe why it is more readable
Eugene's writing is objectively poor, though. I mean, it would be respectable for a layman, but he has articles on Business of Fashion and publishes his own magazine.
But in this case, the subject matter is way more offensive than the words he chose to convey it with.