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post #16 of 21
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Originally Posted by Milhouse View Post
Finally, in general, I prefer to hit the take home point right up front. Figure that you have about a minute of full attention from these folks. Make sure everything essential is said in that first minute. After that, they will be thinking about how much they want to go play golf, what they are going to have for dinner, what sex position they will use tonight, etc.

Everything else needs to support that first minute.

Sounds like good advice. Losing the guy's attention is something that I'm definitely trying to avoid, so it looks like I have an idea for my introductory paragraph now.

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Originally Posted by pocketsquareguy View Post
I have found this to be the best business plan outline for most new projects or all-new business ventures and best of all its free. I've used it with dozens of clients with great success.

http://www.business-plan.com/outline.html

Thanks

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Originally Posted by fredfred View Post
Oman has a very important point. A proposal is MUCH simpler than a business plan. What everyone here has seemed to outline is a business PLAN.

Ask your boss if he has a template that he'd like you to follow.

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Originally Posted by thekunk07 View Post
project plans should be very specific IME/IMO, let them know you understand their particular business challenge.

Hmm, I don't know that I quite understand the difference between a business proposal/business plan. My boss and his boss thought of a project/endeavor that they want to pursue, but to do this and invest money in it, we need to have it approved by the higher ups. And so they want me to write up an essay explaining why it is we want to do what we want to do and how we would do it and how it would benefit the company. What category does this fall into?
post #17 of 21
If this is just a proposal at this stage, in need of preliminary approval, I wouldn't go in with a full-on business plan. Business plans (in my experience) usually have mission statements, SWOT analyses, detailed market breakdowns, marketing mix stuff, etc. They take pages and pages. I don't know if you'll need to go into all that in detail. Here's what I'd do:

Start with a 1-2 page introduction of the product or service. Define it clearly and summarize why you think it will be a positive addition.

Next, show a basic 3-4 year sales projection, potentially even showing optimistic and pessimistic numbers. I've seen it done on a bar chart effectively. State your assumptions clearly.

Same with costs, particularly upfront investment. Optimistic/pessimistic range. Clearly stated assumptions.

Margin projections as well, again, with assumptions. (Of course, I have no idea if you're offering a product, service, or what here).

I would do a brief marketing section explaining why you think it will work, what sort of competitive threats might emerge, pitfalls to avoid. Aim for 3-4 paragraphs here, IMO.

Be sure to have a clear idea of what you want from them next, specifically. I've seen great presentations where execs get on board, but then everyone says, "Great idea! What's next? How do we get started?" and everyone sits around staring blankly at each other. Know what you need to accomplish next so you don't lose momentum or confidence.

Helps also if you pre-define at this stage any gates or future approval stages, so everyone's comfortable they can pull the plug in future if it becomes necessary or if the project is trending negatively.

This should be a good start. You want this on about 3 nice clear pages, with effective graphs and tables to grab attention and show information highlights clearly.

Anyways, that's how I'd do it.
post #18 of 21
One other thing - sort of obvious, but remember what you're doing, and never forget the target audience. You want them to feel confident and comfortable investing money, putting their asses on the line, and there should be a demonstrable return. Remember the risk they're taking greenlighting something, and try to make that decision as easy as possible for them.
post #19 of 21
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Ah yes, that sounds like what I need to do/am doing. Thanks for the tips
post #20 of 21
I think the common theme is: tell the story logically and explain why the organization would want to do your idea.
post #21 of 21
Take some time to identify risks. You may decide not to go into details in your written proposal, but a lot of your discussions will be around risks, their effects, and contingency / planning.

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