Biscotti, the Moscots are great. The jacket is cool and fits well, but I hope you've taken a seam ripper to that godawful Nudie logo on the back. The shirt's color evokes images of an IT professional gone clubbing. It may be BoO, but the fit isn't great. Jawns have cool fades, but the taper and overall tightness conflicts with the vintage vibes coming from the glasses and denim jacket. The shoes are just out of place. A white t shirt, looser (and lighter?) jawns, and some redwings would take that fit a hell of a long way.
I'm nitpicking, but that's just because I like the overall concept (your last fit was one of my favorites), but the execution is just a little bit off, in a few of places.
Bluemagic, you might steam that to a 3-hard roll-2. IMHO, 3-roll-2.5 only can look good on sack jackets.