^ Shoulders and length look pretty good. It appears in the photo that there's bunching at your lower back, which could possibly be addressed by letting the waist out. It also looks like you have a low right shoulder, which is causing a bit of crumpling on that side. I have the same problem. A little more looseness around the waist might relax that a bit and look better overall, IMO. Nice fabric.
2/9/16 at 6:57pm