That was pretty much the core. The central trope of the speech was President as role model/teacher/leader/priority setter for the country our kids will all have to live in, describing Hillary as the person in this election you want playing role. The goal, obviously, was to find a positive rather than a negative way of underscoring the "look, it's her or Trump; that's your fucking choice" argument. It was well done. Solid B or B+ speechwriting, A- delivery.