Hey, Distorbiant (can I call you "DB" for short?) This is a place for the free exchange of ideas, therefore, I won't shut up. I'll learn the protocol of the site and you can block me if you care to in the meantime.
I really want a pair of these shoes: http://leathersoulhawaii.com/2013/02/22/alden-shoe-cxl-lhs-back-in-stock-lsw-lsdt/
They are out of my size and I've looked all over for a similar pair and came up empty.
Your khakis need to be hemmed. They are way too long, and your overall look would be a lot sharper if they were the proper length.
Your shirt also looks too big. Try a trim fit shirt: you'll never want to wear another...